Script runthrough

analyse 

moves the plot along - the character in the resolution scene dies and prepares for the next film

relationship between characters - between the ghost and people in the next movie but in this scene it shows the relationship between the detective and psychic (haunted house)

macro - the scenes of the detective dying will be shown via the monitor which the detective set up earlier in the scene

believable - he acts believable to the situations they put in front of them

evaluation
to improve this i need to create more of a suspense and a sense of a horror film within and keep the style/genre points to link to my macro, and the build up to the ending of the scene